will someone please read this essay and correct it (it’s not finished yet) help me make it better. :)?
Today was the big day for Regina Hoffman, for today she would be going under the blade. There was nothing medically wrong with her, in fact Regina was a healthy person. She was always in some sort of sport throughout high school, thats were she became more social, always meeting new people. Since she was a cheerleader, she felt that she needed to be just a gorgeous as the other girls on the squad. This was the beginning of her troubles.
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Today was the big day for Regina Hoffman, for today she was goint under “the blade”. There was nothing medically wrong with her; in fact, Regina was a healthy person. She was always in sports like basketball throughout her high school career. Since she was a cheerleader, she felt she needed to be just as gorgeous as the other girls on the squad. What she didn’t know was her desire to fit in would lead to the beginning of her troubles.
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