A few days ago
♪ladida♪

What should the concluding sentence for my introduction paragraph be?

heres the paragraph. Any good ideas for the concluding sentence. this is the intro paragraph. Thank so much. xoxo cheese

Earlier this year many variations of bones were found in a remote area on the western side of the United States. Scientists concluded that the bones belonged to a small population of Neanderthals. At a meeting for the United Nations, delegates were arguing the case for including them under the protection of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights. I’m am a lawyer charged with arguing the case. I believe that Neanderthals should be considered humans, and for many reasons. First off, Neanderthals had a way of communication, they could exchange ideas and make advancements if they had not died out. Scientists have also found a skeleton of a child, that has both, modern human and neanderthal resemblance. Another reason is that scientists and all people consider early homo sapiens humans because of the similarities between the two, but neanderthals have many characteristics that we, modern humans have today, so I believe they should be considered human too.

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A few days ago
Nic

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looks good to me, in fact it is a strong ending, i wouldn’t add anything. btw, u have done a really good job with this paragraph.
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4 years ago
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nicely I undergo in innovations my instructor(s) announcing that the final sentence of first paragraph could desire to be your thesis which in turn could desire to be announcing letting the reader understand what his going to be analyzing as an occasion. i’m going to be showing how very own conflict throughout disaster could make a individual extra appropriate. then commence 2d paragraph or some thing like that
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A few days ago
bobcat
So as you see I believe they should be humans to I hope you understand why I think so.
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A few days ago
Staceyflourpond
I’m not sure it needs one, unless your teacher is mean and said you have to have one.

Fix the “I’m am” typo though.

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A few days ago
secret_prayers2
I think you dont need one. you’re good… the last sentence u have worx! =]

good luck! hope i helped!

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