A few days ago
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what’s wrong with this sentence?

1.My Aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave it off and I don’t believe that because my friend shaved hers and it grew back

–there are 5 mistakes.

2. A peanut isn’t no nut its a bean.

–there are 3 mistakes

HELP. please no RUDE answers.

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A few days ago
ganna

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My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them but not if you shave them off. I don’t believe that because my friend shaved hers and they grew back.

1Aunt not a proper noun 2 run-on sentence 3period at the end 4shave them off 5 they grew back

A peanut isn’t a nut. It’s a bean.

double negative run-on sentence contraction of it is

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A few days ago
Jackie C
My aunt told me, that eyebrows do grow back if they are plucked, but not when they are shaved off. I dont’t believe that,because; my friend shaved her eyebrows off and they grew back. 2.) A peanut is not a nut, it is a bean.
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A few days ago
ruth4526
My aunt told me that eye brows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off. I don’t believe that because my friend shaved hers’ and they grew back. 2. A peanut isn’t no nut its a bean,= A peanut is not a nut, it is a bean. or A peanut isn’t a nut, it’s a bean.
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A few days ago
zanessa<3
My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off, and I don’t believe that because my friend shaved hers and they grew back.

A peanut isn’t a nut, it’s a bean.

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A few days ago
skyblue
1. My aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave them off, and I don’t believe that becuause my friend shaved hers, and they grew back.

2. A peanut isn’t a nut; it’s a bean.

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A few days ago
capriciousclover
1. My *aunt told me that eyebrows will grow back if you pluck them, but not if you shave *them *. *I don’t believe that because my shaved hers and *they grew back*.

2. A peanut *isn’t *a nut, *it’s a bean.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
1) first there is a switch from a plural to a singular when referring to the eyebrows, basically from “them” to “it”; it’s a run on sentence, the second part should be separated; “my friend shaved hers” should be referrig to something…it doesn’t say eyebrows; “it grew back” should probably be “they grew back”; usually after a comma the first thing said refers back to the subject of the sentence and you can see that “but not if you shave it off” has no relation to “my aunt”.

2) there is a double negative “isn’t no”; “its” should be it’s; and there should probably be a comma after the word nut.

i hope i helped and i hope i’m right!

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A few days ago
charonnisis
1-1) If I pluck them

1-2) Not if I

1-3) Shave THEM off

1-4) BUT I don’t believe

1-5) and THEY grew back

2-1) Isn’t A

2-2) Its

2-3) Need a comma after nut???

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A few days ago
Alex B
#2. 1. isn’t a nut

2. its should be it’s

3. A comma should be between nut and it’s

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A few days ago
plentyofmoxie84
1. aunt shouldn’t be capitalized

no comma needed after them

“shave it” should be, “shave them”

it’s a run-on so erase the “and,” and start a new sentence at “I don’t”

“it grew back” should be, “they grew back”

2. “no” should be “a”

you need a comma after “nut”

“its” should be, “it’s”

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