What do u think of my feature article?
The Great Heroes of the Bible Versus the Modern Heroes of Today
Different ages, cultures, and beliefs vary the heroic personality. To the historian, a hero is one who shapes the course of events; to the philosopher, one who alters the thinking of his times; to the folklorist, one who evokes legends and songs. The search for true heroism is inherent in human nature. This article will discuss the definition of true heroism, how biblical heroes compare with modern-day heroes, and how biblical heroes are more successful, valued, and appreciated.
A true hero is a godly role model who exhibits great courage and perseverance. His motives are pure, self-sacrificial, and ordained for the benefit of others. He is not afraid to stand up for what is right, even though it may cost him his life. Above all, his goals are righteous and inspired by God, and therefore he achieves them successfully.
Favorite Answer
One, is this supposed to be an opinion piece? If so, then most of it fits nicely (although I don’t really agree with you on some of your premises).
As to the mechanics of the piece, I think it was quite good. I could give a better opinion if I knew what grade you are in.
The one piece that definitely caught my attention in a bad way (again, mechanically), was this line “This article will discuss the definition of …”
As a matter of style, I never like the “this article” “This essay” thing. Your thesis statement should be strong enough that you don’t have to tell us what it will be about.
Other than that, nice job!
P.S. I don’t have to agree with you to appreciate good work.
Think the article is okay but you have said that its a feature article (in what area).
Saying that i think that the article is very personal. The article is very pro bible however its not based on fact. Which make the article personal.
We know that history books (and the bible is a history book) are written by people who want us to believe in one thing.
What i am disappointed in is that you don’t use real modern day heroes such as mother tereasa (forgive the spelling) or Mahatma Gandhi. What about local individuals who have given selfishlessly to their community by voluntarily working in homeless shelters. The models that you have written about could be argued that they are not heroes but rather people who inspire us which is a different thing entirely.
However good luck with the article
Please read my essay question and help me out as well! thanks!
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