A few days ago
xoMegAnxo

so i have to write a paper about discipline..help?

i have to write a paper for drill team tryouts and i have to write about the importance of discipline on a team and how i will contribute positively. this is what i have so far:

In order to have a positive and successful team it is necessary to have a disciplined team. Disciplined teams don’t only look better when they are performing but if you maintain discipline on and off the performance, the experience of being the team would be a lot more enjoyable for everyone.

any one have any ideas of what to put next?

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A few days ago
music_literature_freak

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In the second line, replace ‘don’t’ with ‘not’ and instead of saying ‘but if you maintain discipline,’ say ‘if the discipline is maintained on and off the performance, then the experience of the team would be a lot more enjoyable for everyone.’
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A few days ago
mulderlx
You should define discipline first. What are ways to apply discipline in a team setting? How does discipline help make a team more positive? What does lack of discipline do to a team? Research the benefits of discipline and give examples.

Never write “you” in a paper and don’t tell people what to do. Show people through explanations.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
i am not too sure about your paper requirement but if you can get some real-life testimonial that may be a huge thumbs up from your lecturer. at least show that you have did a decent research and something refreshing 🙂
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