A few days ago
Anonymous

short story building tension..but has twist at end?

right, for my english i need to write a short story/description

it has to build up tension

but then have a major twist at the end.

examples:

1) through out the description it sounds as if theres a huge sunami… but in the end its a sand castle getting washed away

2) through out the description is sounds like the person is a mad man who eats people saying stuff like “i cant wait to eat the leg” and stuff… then it turns out he is eating KFC

can any one think of a good thing like that?

im realy stuck

so it needs to be like a wierd situation that i can build up suspence but then it turns out to be a normal/ every day event

Thanks

Top 1 Answers
A few days ago
Just some guy

Favorite Answer

How about this: write a story that appears to talk about a prisoner being held captive in the most horrible conditions ever… no food, nothing to do, no one to tak to (maybe “solitary confinement”); sitting and staring at the same dreary blank wall for what has seemed like forever; wondering if he’ll ever see the light of day again, ever feel the grass beneath his toes; throat parched; perhaps he attempts to think of a way to escape, but gives up because he knows it will be useless; all hope is gone……. and then at the end, the door opens and a woman walks in who says, “Okay Billy, your time-out is over. You can get up from the corner now.”
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