A few days ago
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read my “x-rexia” short story plzzz….?

i wrote a story for my writing class and i need some people to read it to find mistakes…

A bloodthirsty virus appears in a small town of England. People are contaminated with fever, diarrhea, and several different viruses at the same time, hospitals are busy treating from a young child to an adult, but doctors have no permanent cure to x-rexia. This epidemic becomes the media’s breaking news, threatening people all around the world. A Scientist named Dr. Cruz from United States, hear the words and set out for a journey to England to discover the reality. While, his girlfriend doubts him that he might be infected with the disease and that is why he is traveling so far away just to find a therapy. Not long after Dr. Cruz arrives in the town, the truth was uncovered that the disease was just pyrexia, less fearsome than what they had thought. Dr. Cruz is triumphs in successfully finding the treatment to the virus. People recovered right after he found the cure.

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A few days ago
Jessica

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I moved it around a little, but it was a good story…

Here goes (if you don’t like it, then that’s cool too)

In the small town of _____, a bloodthristy virus arose out of no where. The people contaminated were plagued with high fevers, diarrhea, and several other symptoms, as well. Hospitals all over were busy dealing with the sick, from infants to elderly. Doctors quickly searched books and journals for a cure, but could not find one for X-Rexia. The epidemic became a news sensation, every channel with new breaking reports of threats that reached around the world. A scientist, Dr. Cruz, from the United States heard one of the reports and immediately packed his bags for England. (The girlfriend statement should be clarified..something like: His girlfriend, Lauren, did not want him to go in fear that he may contract the virus…etc.). Not long after Dr. Cruz arrived, he visited a local hospital to discuss the outbreak, there he talks with doctors and gathers more information. After talking with several people, Dr. Cruz realizes that this is just an outbreak of Pyrexia. Other hospitals were notified and treatment was started. Immediately the symptoms began to disappear and many people felt much better after a short time. Dr. Cruz triumphs in his ability to quickly diagnose the problem and get the public the help they needed. Soon, the townspeople went back to life as normal and Dr. Cruz became a frequent visitor.

The End

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4 years ago
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A few days ago
Kall Me Kate
Is this the over-view or the story?

I love editing, if you need help.

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