please revise my pargarph and edit sme words?
thx
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This would likely bring about the question of how one could believe in a God that they cannot see, or touch or feel. I would ask them to consider how water freezes at zero degrees Celsius, but only on the surface. This allows for the survival of the immense number of being that live within water. How this system allows for fishermen, living in even the harshest environments, to obtain food, in temperatures well below freezing. God is amazing in that no small detail is overlooked.
I didn’t understand the last sentence. Please clarify for me! thx!
If I were you, I’d revise and proofread it myself since you’re actually the one in school. Good thing you’re not not me, though. Oh! If I really did edit that piece, then I’d want the grade for it, too. Only fair, no?
To help you out a little; your question has spelling errors. =)
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