please revise my paragraph and edit some words please?
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Good work, I changed a few sentences to give it better flow, and make sure when you’re talking about God or Jesus, correct grammar requires that you capitalize “His,” or “Him” or anything like that.
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The quotes make “blessed” and “righteous hand” sound sarcastic! That’s what journalist do to terms when they quote someone rediculous so they don’t print something untrue.
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You need to quote the actual Bible not the Bible you’ve invented!!!
You need to understand the terms you are using.
You need to cite sources academically NOT accidentally.
Your paper needs to speak for itself. Don’t base it on Matthew 5:3 and not give the text. We don’t even know what translation you are using.
You need to gain a deeper understanding of the Bible.
You clearly haven’t read Genesis or are merely recalling it poorly.
This would get a “D-” in my religion class!
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