A few days ago
Anonymous

please revise my paragraph and edit some words please?

We are all “blessed” in different ways. For instance, pianists are blessed having a natural talent in playing the piano. However, Jesus blesses us through words in Matthew 5:3. Blessing from Jesus is the most precious because his words last forever. As Genesis, God orders let there be light and land. Jesus teaches the crowd and states if you are “poor in spirit,” you are anointed. What dose “poor in spirit” mean? For example, if you are hungry after running down the street in morning without having breakfast, you want to eat whatever snack or food even if it doesn’t taste delicious. On the other hand, if you are full, you don’t want to eat anything. If you are “poor in spirit,” you want to rely on your parents or friends and be comforted through words. People believing in Jesus should be poor in spirit by empting their mind and have a room for the fresh water that the Holy Spirit gives. Then, Jesus can lead you with his “righteous hand” to the green pastures.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
We are all blessed in different ways. For instance, pianists are blessed to have a natural talent for playing the piano. However, Jesus blesses us through words in Matthew 5:3. A blessing from Jesus is the most precious, because his words last forever. As Genesis, God orders let there be light and land. Jesus teaches the crowd and states: “if you are poor in spirit, you are anointed.” What does “poor in spirit” mean? For example, if you are hungry after running down the street in morning without having breakfast, you want to eat whatever snack or food, even if it doesn’t taste delicious. On the other hand, if you are full you don’t want to eat anything. If you are “poor in spirit,” you want to rely on your parents or friends and be comforted through words. People who belive in Jesus should be poor in spirit by empting their mind and have a room for the fresh water that the Holy Spirit gives. Then, Jesus can lead you with his “righteous hand” to the green pastures.

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A few days ago
Heather
We are all “blessed” in different ways. For instance, pianists are blessed by having a natural talent for playing the piano. However, Jesus blesses everyone through His words in Matthew 5:3. A Blessing from Jesus is the most precious kind because His words last forever. As stated in Genesis, God orders “Let there be light and land.” Jesus teaches the crowd and states “if you are poor in spirit, you are anointed.” What dose “poor in spirit” mean? For example, if you are hungry after running down the street in the morning without having had breakfast, you will whatever food is available, even if it doesn’t taste delicious. On the other hand, if you are full, you don’t want to eat anything. If you are “poor in spirit,” you want to rely on your parents or friends and be comforted through words. People believing in Jesus should be “poor in spirit” by empting their minds and by having a room for the fresh water that the Holy Spirit gives. Then, Jesus can lead them with His “righteous hand” to the green pastures.

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Good work, I changed a few sentences to give it better flow, and make sure when you’re talking about God or Jesus, correct grammar requires that you capitalize “His,” or “Him” or anything like that.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
We are all blessed in different ways. For EXAMPLE, pianists are blessed having a natural talent in playing the piano (Not true, many work very hard to establish there skill). However, Jesus blesses us through HIS words in Matthew 5:3 (MUST GIVE THE PASSAGE, CAN’T JUST CITE IT). BlessingS from Jesus are the most precious (removed “because” it weakens the sentances). His words last forever. IN Genesis, God SAYS “let there be light and land” (WHICH HE DOESN’T SAY READ AND CITE GENESIS CORRECTLY-see link). Jesus teaches the crowd and states if you are “poor in spirit,” you are anointed. (HE DOESN’T SAY THAT EITHER, Read Beatitudes-THEIRS IS THE KINGDOM OF HEAVEN) What dOES “poor in spirit” mean? (It means HOPELESS) For INSTANCE, if you are hungry after running down the street (X-in morning-IMPLIED BY BREAKFAST) without having breakfast, you want to eat whatever snack or food even if it doesn’t taste delicious. On the other hand, if you are full, you don’t want to eat anything. If you are “poor in spirit,” you want to rely on your parents or friends and be comforted through words. People believing in Jesus should be poor in spirit by emptYing their mind (THAT’s Not what’s IMPLIED by the BEATITUDES) and have a room for the fresh water that the Holy Spirit gives (The Holy Spirit feels people with FIRE, NOT WATER-Jesus’s Blood is the Water of Life). Then, Jesus can lead you with his righteous hand (Quotes indicate that it isn’t true and is just hearsay) to the green pastures.

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The quotes make “blessed” and “righteous hand” sound sarcastic! That’s what journalist do to terms when they quote someone rediculous so they don’t print something untrue.

emptYing

You need to quote the actual Bible not the Bible you’ve invented!!!

You need to understand the terms you are using.

You need to cite sources academically NOT accidentally.

Your paper needs to speak for itself. Don’t base it on Matthew 5:3 and not give the text. We don’t even know what translation you are using.

You need to gain a deeper understanding of the Bible.

You clearly haven’t read Genesis or are merely recalling it poorly.

This would get a “D-” in my religion class!

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A few days ago
mf east
Maybe more examples for being blessed in different ways. It’s very short compared to the religious answer.
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5 years ago
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