A few days ago

please!! i need help! this is like hell for me.. 10 points!?

i try so hard in english but i can never get it right =(

i have to write a free style story. this is like hell for me. i have thought for like hours and hours and come up with a bit..

so far i have..

i was thinking the characters could be about 6 15-16 year old girls and they go on holiday to france. they would go to the beach a lot and meet new people there.. go on tourist trips and umm.. cant think of what could happen

see im rubbish! any ideas on what could happen? please

1thanks x

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A few days ago
‘Sunnyside Up’

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The best free style stories are ones that could really happen and with you as one of the characters. So I suggest you write about an experience that you would like to do with you as one of the characters, but not necessarily the main one. If you are taking a trip abroad, then be creative. Everyone goes to the beach or takes a holiday. Maybe you all could go over and help out in an orphanage or with some tragic happening that happened like being a Red Cross Volunteer at a earthquake site or something. Maybe you could all go over and meet some royal family and then find out that you are related to them and then get asked to become a dutchess or even get asked by a real prince to marry them. That is what happened to Grace Kelly in real life. I found out that our family is actually royalty and when England had different provinces with kings in each one, there were two brothers that I am a decendent of that were kings in their own castles. It’s too bad they lost and Queen Elizabeth’s clan won or I would be in the palace now… haha. Just make your story creative and full of life. Don’t limit the story to just the beach or touring. Make whatever you write about something that the people that read it will wish they could be a part of or at least imagine about while they are reading the story.
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A few days ago
Blondie
In France the girls could make a trip to Paris & visit the Louve, the Eifle Tower, the Arch de Trioump… Maybe meet someone famous? Eva Longaria and Tony Parker? Someone could meet a boy, and fall in love… Or how about have a fight happen between the girls and they split up 3 and 3 and experience different parts of France…

Best of luck.. hope this helps some..

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A few days ago
Anonymous
*Narrow the characters to two. Too many requires too much character development on your part.

Holiday Dream

Zoaring high in their American Flight 1592, Carol and Zoe giggle with anticipation and excitement : They have waited for months for their trip to Paris.

Carol, being the “clothes-horse” that she is, will want all the cute clothes in the shops. Since her cool Dad gave her a $ 1,000.00 spending limit on his Visa card, she can’t wait to pick out a “hot” purse and a pair of “to-die for” boots. Hopefully, she won’t spend it all in one place. She’s got a level head, but her eyes light up like “a kid in a candy store” when she passes boutiques.

Then there’s Zoe: Perfectly built, model-should-be. You know the one…Flawless skin, the year-round tan, and hair down-to-there. Guys flock around her constantly. She’s the “beach bum,” so they will hit somewhere daily without a doubt. It will be a good mix for them both, since Carol isn’t a beach goer and Zoe’s idea of sheik is jeans and a t-shirt.

(You take it from there). Good luck with your paper)!

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A few days ago
supergirl3009
they could find a long lost item with a note asking the finder to make sure it is given to his true love as something has obviously befallen him and then you could tell of their search for her
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A few days ago
Le
lol it’d be funny for them to come upon a nude beach and be like “oh. my. god”
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A few days ago
Anonymous
k thats fine, but make then go on a nude beach. and the get raped!lol nahh uhm dey go to da beach… then they get kidnapped then they get killed the end? but stretch it out? maybe? idk i got writers block i cant write about **** either.
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