A few days ago
D B

Please correct my grammer and punctuation.?

As a child my sister and I played “house,” “school,” and “office” just about every day. If it wasn’t one game, it was the other; and sometime one after the other. We knew exactly what we wanted to do with our lives when we “grew up.” We had the dreams of being a teacher, owning our own business, and eventually becoming a wife and mom. While some of our dreams have come true, we are both still working on others. I would have never imagined my dreams coming ture this early in life, but now there is room for new and exciting ventures. In this issue of ______ you can find dreams come true as well as stories about the dreams of our future. I hope you enjoy them and discover a new dream of your own along with the will power to make it come true. No dream is too big or unachievable. It may have to be tweaked along the way, but with determination, it will be accomplished.

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A few days ago
Bruce

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Revision: As children, my sister and I played “house,” “school,” and “office” nearly every day. If it wasn’t one game, it was another, and sometime one after another. We knew exactly what we wanted to do with our lives when we “grew up.” We dreamed of being teachers, owning our own businesses, and becoming wives and moms. While some of our dreams have come true, we both continue working on others. I would never have imagined my dreams coming true this early in life, but now I envision new and exciting ventures.

In this issue of ______, you will find stories about dreams coming true as well as fresh dreams about the future. I hope you enjoy them and discover new dreams of your own. I hope, too, that you will discover the willpower to make your dreams come true. No dream is too big or unachievable. You may have to revise your dreams along the way, but with determination, you can accomplish great things.

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Bruce

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A few days ago
Just my opinion
As a child my sister and I played house, school, and office just about every day. We either played one game or the other. On other occasions we sometimes played one after the other. We spent most of our time playing, and talking about the future. We had conversations about the various dreams we had of becoming teachers’, owning our own businesses, and eventually having a family. Some of our dreams have come true while the others are a work in progress. I am blessed to have my dreams come true so early in life. Now I have more time to add room for new and exciting ventures. In this issue of ______ I hope to share similiar stories dreams come to life as well as the hopes and desires of the future may hold. Hopefully these stories are enlightening and help illustrate how dreams can still come true. No dream is too big or unachievable. It may have to be tweaked along the way, but with determination, it can be accomplished.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
As children, my sister and I played “house,” “school,” and “office” just about every day. If it wasn’t one game, it was the other; and sometimes one after the other. We knew exactly what we wanted to do with our lives when we “grew up.” We had dreams of being teachers, owning our own business, and eventually becoming wives and moms. While some of our dreams have come true, we are both still working on others. I would have never imagined my dreams coming true this early in life, but now there is room for new and exciting ventures. In this issue of ______ you can find dreams coming true, as well as stories about the dreams of our future. I hope you enjoy them and discover a new dream of your own, along with the will power to make it come true. No dream is too big or unachievable. It may have to be tweaked along the way, but with determination, it will be accomplished.
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4 years ago
chillcott
You spell “purposly” as purposely. The “theyre” needs an apostrophe – they’re. And sure, the semicolon might paintings there. Do you employ microsoft observe? have to procure the spell examine and grammar examine on? If no longer then I advise you employ it because of the fact it ought to keep you somewhat some difficulty.
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