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Part II ..please correct my following sentences ..thanks a million?
the main reason I want to switch my career into high-tech industry is that I beleive high tech plays an imporetant part and provides a lot of business opportuities and compeition in North Ameria even in this globalized century.
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The main reason that I want to follow a career into the high-tech industry, is that I believe high-tech plays an important role in today’s society and provides a lot of business opportunities and competition in North America even in this globalized century when …..
The last part is fragmented – starting at “and competition” you have to be clearer about what you mean. Competition for whom? And expand what you mean by globalized century
for example something like “even in this globalized century when high-tech is not just located in north america but all over the world” something like that.
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The main reason for wanting to change my career path to the high-technology industry is that I believe high tech plays an important role through ever-increasing business opportunities, and promotion of competition in North America.
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