A few days ago
jennie_12546

need help with a thesis statement on beauty!?

okay, so the question posed was … what is beauty? is it inherent in all of us (genetic)? or is it something taught, developed and practiced? So i am saying that it is taught, *we learn it from a young age based on what we hear people say (oh shes fat, or shes so cute), *also our concept of beauty is taught by our cultural norms,*also that media shapes the way we look at beauty. (the stars mean the points i am making in my essay)…….. I NEED A THESIS STATEMENT! i have so much trouble doing thesis statements. Can somone tell what a good thesis statement would be….. thanks a million!

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A few days ago
elephanatic4ever

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Beauty is a matter of opinion, formed at a young age by the people around one, the environment, and the media.
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A few days ago
old lady
YOU DON’T NEED A THESIS STATEMENT. You need a topic sentence. You have not proposed an original suggestion about beauty or the standards of beauty. You are simply defending a point of view that has already been expressed many times.

Your topic sentence might be: Beauty is only skin deep, but our concept of beauty reflects the cultural norms that influence the way in which we judge the attractiveness of others.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
You actually have two good statements right in your question.

You can use the media (the one I like the best) because you can even relate that throughout history, when the “media” was artwork. Look at Renaissance paintings. How are the women portrayed? Where they the epitome of beauty then?

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A few days ago
Alex R
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder – who’s (the beholder)?
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A few days ago
hot bitch
everyone is beautiful
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A few days ago
lilley0011
Beuty is in everyone
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