The legal drinking age in America should be changed to eighteen from twenty-one because at eighteen, you are considered an adult.

Paragraph one – You can in list in the army at 18, but can’t drink? You are adult enough to fight for you country but not to drink…

Paragraph two: 18 is the legal age one is considered an adult – being an adult should give you the rights to drink.

etc..

You can talk about how being 18 you can get married, but one cannot drink alcohol at the wedding reception.

Good luck!

For the rest of it, I would recommend that you start by just plain writing down what you have to say about it and then going through and moving related sentences nearer to each other and then revamping those sentences to make sure that they’re still understandable that way, and then separate the places where the sentences are more distantly related to each other, into paragraphs.

Start or end with your strongest argument.

For instance, those against lowering the age will argue that 18-year-olds cannot handle the responsibility of drinking. You can counter that 18-year-olds are asked to defend their country as members of the armed forces, and are also eligible to vote and thus determine how America is governed.

Good luck with your essay!

1paragraph:should be and introductory paragraph like the the effects it has on you

2paragraph:explain the 1st effect it has on you

3: explain the 2nd effect it has on you

4: concluding paragraph summarize what you said throughout the essay