Need a proof read. Anyone interested in helping me out? =)?
Add info: I need to write and eight-sentence paragraph that fully developes the topic. I need any advice out there on if I missed anything from punctuation to spelling, you name it, please see what you can find. And let me know how I did here. I’m really hoping I covered what was was required in this.
Thank so much !!! =)
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(2) “It is” should be the first words
(4) It was built in 1929 for $350,000; today it would cost nearly $20 million (no caps on the m).
(6) The width of the bridge is 18 feet, and measures 1,260 feet from tower to tower.
Good job otherwise! I live in Colorado, and I’ve been there quite a few times. I’m scared of heights but it is pretty amazing.
2. It is currently the world’s largest suspension bridge.
3. This man-made wonder is an astonishing 1,000 feet, or 304.8 meters above the Arkansas River.
4. Built in 1929 at a cost of $ 350,000, the Royal Gorge today would cost nearly $ 20 Million.
5. The two main towers of this bridge both stand 150 feet
tall (add preposition here).
6. The width of the bridge is 18 feet, with a overall length between the towers of 1,260 feet.
7. The Royal Bridge itself offers breathtaking views from above as well as below.
8. It’s truly a place to be enjoyed by all ages, young and the old alike.
– hope I helped and changed the adjectives a bit if you like.
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