A few days ago
firefly_eyes75

Need a proof read. Anyone interested in helping me out? =)?

(1)Nestled in the Rocky Montains just outside of Canon City Colorado, lies The Royal Gorge. (2) The largest suspension Bridge in the world today. (3) This man-made wonder is an astonishing 1,000 feet above the Arkansas River. (4) Built in 1929 at a cost of $ 350,000, today would cost nearly $ 20 Million. (5) The two main towers stand at 150 feet tall. (6) The width of the bridge is 18 feet, with a overall length between the towers of 1,260 feet. (7) The Bridge itself offers breathtaking views from above as well as below.(8) It’s truely a place to be enjoyed by both the young and the old alike.

Add info: I need to write and eight-sentence paragraph that fully developes the topic. I need any advice out there on if I missed anything from punctuation to spelling, you name it, please see what you can find. And let me know how I did here. I’m really hoping I covered what was was required in this.

Thank so much !!! =)

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first of all, don’t put any spaces between your paragraphs.

(2) “It is” should be the first words

(4) It was built in 1929 for $350,000; today it would cost nearly $20 million (no caps on the m).

(6) The width of the bridge is 18 feet, and measures 1,260 feet from tower to tower.

Good job otherwise! I live in Colorado, and I’ve been there quite a few times. I’m scared of heights but it is pretty amazing.

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A few days ago
DoubleDigit
1. Nestled in the Rocky Mountains, just outside of Canon City, Colorado, lies the breath-taking Royal Gorge.

2. It is currently the world’s largest suspension bridge.

3. This man-made wonder is an astonishing 1,000 feet, or 304.8 meters above the Arkansas River.

4. Built in 1929 at a cost of $ 350,000, the Royal Gorge today would cost nearly $ 20 Million.

5. The two main towers of this bridge both stand 150 feet

tall (add preposition here).

6. The width of the bridge is 18 feet, with a overall length between the towers of 1,260 feet.

7. The Royal Bridge itself offers breathtaking views from above as well as below.

8. It’s truly a place to be enjoyed by all ages, young and the old alike.

– hope I helped and changed the adjectives a bit if you like.

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