A few days ago
blahhhhhh

my anti-fur essay help?

i have to write an essay arguing a point, and im arguing about why fur is bad what should i write about in the body?

i have the intro and conclusion

the second is on fur farming, that it is cruel cuz of the small cages they live in

the next i will write about the way they kill them

i need another paragraph but i dont know what to write about

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A few days ago
Philippian

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For paragraph 3 talk about how and why fur is unnecessary. It is a luxury that people can live without. Clothing can be made without killing animals. We aren’t cavemen anymore. We don’t need fur to keep warm, make blankets and clothes. etc… Point out each “use” for fur, and then point out an alternative for each.

So in your conclusion you can say that since fur isn’t necessary (paragraph. 3), and because it’s cruel (paragraphs 1 and 2), that people shouldn’t buy or use it.

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A few days ago
kaitlyn, ftw. (:
You Go Gurl I hate how they do that just d=so some 1 can get a coat or gloves or mittens or somtin
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A few days ago
Anonymous
I could help you a lot on this.

Do you have AIM?

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A few days ago
Anonymous
http://youtube.com/watch?v=BGw_ZJ34RDU

http://furisdead.com/

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hope this helps

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