A few days ago
Anonymous

Is this thesis good?

The u.s.a shlould not disclose any evidence or information of extraterestrial beigs existing until thel American people are both emotianaly and mentaly ready.

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The u.s.a shlould not disclose any evidence or information of extraterestrial beigs existing .

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A few days ago
gorge momma

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Not the first one-stop at existing. The rest might be part of the body of your essay, if that’s what you want to explore.

Both of these assume that our govt has positive proof of the existence of extraterrestrial beings: a huge assumption that your readers (teacher/peer reviewers) will, or should, challenge. I would be happy to carry on this critique further through e-mail or IM.

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