A few days ago
Anonymous

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

“However, I decided not to, remembering that I was trying to overcome a fear, not make it worse.”

If it’s not grammatically correct, how should I fix it?

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A few days ago
jarod_jared

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I disagree with Elizabeth. From what I had learned, ‘however’ can be used in the beginning of a sentence to denote a transition, as in e.g.:

‘I wanted to sleep. However, the night was too warm; I stayed up instead.’

That said, the adverb can also be used in the middle of a sentence, as in e.g.:

‘I will allow you to travel however you please.’

That adverb now means ‘in whatever manner’. Check out the link below to read more.

One comment though; avoid using too much comma. You don’t want the reader to feel breathless.

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A few days ago
phreadriquebean
Remembering that I was trying to overcome a fear, however, I decided not to make it worse.
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A few days ago
Tunesmith
Yeah, that’s correct.

I might change it to “However, I decided not to, remembering that I was trying to overcome a fear and not make it worse.” but that’s up for debate. 🙂

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A few days ago
Anonymous
no.

right answer:

“However, I decided not to; remembering that I was trying to overcome a fear, not make it worse.”

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A few days ago
Meg F
“However” shouldn’t be used to start a sentence. While it’s hard to rephrase this without knowing the context of the sentence, my suggestion would be, “I decided not to, however, remembering that I was trying to overcome a fear, rather than make it worse”.
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A few days ago
f1 car
“However, i decided not to, remembering that i was trying to overcome a fear, AND not make it worse.”

there you go!

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A few days ago
Tricky
It’s correct but not very easy to read.
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