A few days ago
Dan

is this introduction good or bad?

The morning rush hour was in full force, the subway trains rolling. For thousands of citizens, the relaxing weekend trips to the beach and the zoo were still in their minds. One individual had other thoughts on his mind. The weekend was spent making last preparations for a plan that will forever change the lives of him and the thousands of people standing right next to him. He was sweating bullets and clearing his throat constantly, yet, nobody was giving him suspicious looks. At last, a train came to a stop at the station he was residing at. He entered the train calmly, allowing others to enter ahead of him. When the train left the station, it was down to business. He reached into his pocket, where he kept the detonation device. Terrorism has been taking place in the world for centuries. Ever since the terrorist attacks on 9/11, the word terrorism has become the worlds most feared word. There isn’t a day that goes by that goes by where the word terrorism isn’t used by the main stream media. But, how is the word terrorism defined? The Oxford English Dictionary (1989) defines terrorism as “A policy intended to strike terror against whom it is adopted”. This paper will introduce to you three different types of terrorism: state, domestic and international by defining them and giving examples of each and with the information I will define terrorism in my own words.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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I clicked onto your ? by complete accident and was immediately interested! Good job. Take into account some of the other user’s suggestions, and it will be top-notch. Best of luck with the rest of your essay! I am impressed!!
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A few days ago
Skyleigh’s Mom :)™
The (MONDAY) morning rush hour was in full force, the subway trains rolling. For thousands of citizens, relaxing weekend trips to the beach and the zoo were still in their minds. One individual had other thoughts on his mind. The weekend was spent making last preparations for a plan that will forever change the lives of him and the thousands of people standing right next to him. He was sweating, and clearing his throat constantly, yet, nobody was giving him suspicious looks. At last, a train came to a stop at the station he was residing at. He entered the train calmly, allowing others to enter ahead of him. When the train left the station, it was down to business. He reached into his pocket, where he kept the detonation device.

Terrorism has been taking place in the world for centuries. Ever since the terrorist attacks on 9/11, the word terrorism has become (A) feared word. There isn’t a day that goes by that goes by where the word terrorism isn’t used by the main stream media. But, how is the word terrorism defined? The Oxford English Dictionary (1989) defines terrorism as “A policy intended to strike terror against whom it is adopted”. This paper will introduce to you three different types of terrorism: state, domestic and international by defining them and giving examples of each and with the information I will define terrorism in my own words

That is how I would write it. My additons, are in the (PARENTHESIS) Sounds good though. I took a few words out, and changed some past tense words to present.

GOOD LUCK!

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A few days ago
Herm
I would love to read the rest of your paper! It is intriguing and states what your paper is about which can be seen as your thesis statement. It definitely leaves the reader hanging. The beginning is like a story so at first I thought that you weren’t writing a persuasive essay, just fiction but I think it is brilliant how you have incorporated that in your introduction. The only thing that I can mention for improvement is that I know that my own english teacher would say that it is too long (because we were taught that they were only meant to be 5-10 lines long).

Good luck 🙂 I’m sure you’ll get a top grade on this essay!!!

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A few days ago
Anonymous
It’s a good intro. But I wouldn’t say that “Ever since the terrorist attacks on 9/11, the word terrorism has become the worlds most feared word”. Spare your teacher the drama.
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4 years ago
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