A few days ago
satellite_in_my_eyes

I need help with a transition sentence in an essay?

The essay is about how I stand out…the is just the beginning paragraph..

“I don’t think of all the misery but of the beauty that still remains,” Anne Frank once inspiringly wrote in her famous diary. Although she and I are in different situations, I relate to her because I to look for beauty in things, rather than the despair. (NEED TRANSITION HERE…HLP) A trait that I pride myself over is my positive personality, which helps me see the beauty in a situation. Having optimistic views helps me, as well as others, in a challenging situation. I have also noticed that my positive outlook on matters has a contagious affect on others. Watching how my positive personality helps people only makes the optimism more beautiful. I believe having a positive personality helps me stand out from other candidates because having this trait is a quality that helps one improve oneself and others.

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A few days ago
redkazoo

Favorite Answer

try saying..

Like Anne, I pride myself in my positive personality, helping me to see the beauty in every situation.

good luck!!

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5 years ago
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First off you should state what exactly the GLBT is, people may not know what it is, and it can cause points to be deducted from your paper. Next the part where you say “…Because they deserve they feel the right to equality…”. That makes no sense at all. You could say something like: “…Because they deserve to feel the rights to equality…”. Anyways For that transition sentence, Take what you said in the second paragraph of ur question and kind restate it and reword it a little….Like for example: Even though homosexuality does not infringe on heterosexuals, it is still discriminated against and considered illegal.
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A few days ago
Bill F
First you need another “o” on the word “too” – …I too look for…

Try this – “Despair, like all negatives “takes away”, whereas positives “add” – we learned that in third grade math.”

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A few days ago
sidecar0
“Likewise” is good but you will also need to Spell and Grammar check everything!
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A few days ago
Philladelphia
You can go by saying “Likewise, blah blah blah blah”. Where “Likewise,” is the transition.
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