A few days ago
Anonymous

How does this essay sound? (intro)?

The price to pay for a tattoos body image improvement

“There are no definitive statistics on tattoo removal, but Catherine A. Kniker, a senior vice president for laser manufacturer Candela, calculated that Americans may have 100,000 laser tattoo removal treatments this year.” Stated and article by Natasha Singer, writer for The New York Times. Thousands of Americans are beginning to consider tattoos as a way to improve the way they look or the image they want to portray. People should not get tattoos to improve their body image. In doing so, people are going to face various tattoo stigmas that could have an effect on your social and economical status and could possibly be emotionally challenging to withstand. Also, in consequence that the tattoo has little or no meaning to the person, they would eventually get bored of it, and be forced consider laser removal processes. Another reason to take into consideration is the standard of body image, like fashion, is it constantly changing an

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The price you pay for tattooed body image improvement can be too high. Change your mind, and it will cost you plenty to get it removed financially, and you may suffer from the stigmatism of being one of THOSE people as well.

“There are no definitive statistics on tattoo removal,” says Catherine A. Kniker, a senior vice president for laser manufacturer Candela. She has estimated that Americans may have 100,000 laser tattoo removal treatments this year. Thousands of Americans are beginning to consider tattoos as a way to improve the way they look or the image they want to portray.

People should not get tattoos to improve their body image. In doing so, people are going to face various tattoo stigmas that could have an effect on their social and economical status and could be emotionally challenging to withstand, possibly.

Also in consequence if the tattoo has little or no meaning to the person, he/she would eventually get bored of it and be forced to consider a laser removal processes. Another reason to reconsider a tattoo is that the standard of body image, like fashion, is that it is changing constantly…

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A few days ago
CalculusFreak
Very interesting way you started your essay with a quote. Good, good. You can really make a good essay out of this! Just check your spelling, vary your sentence structures, and shorten your paragraphs to five sentences. May I also mention that you have a really good topic? Hope you make the most out of this! All the best with your writing!
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A few days ago
Anonymous
its good… will it get me an a ? on my senior project??

jk

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