A few days ago
How do you say…?
that everything was exciting and moving around me… but in better wording? Maybe something with one of the 5 senses? I am writing about what I feel, see, hear, smell, and taste before, during, and after I jump of a diving board, and trying to come up with a good topic sentence.
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A few days ago
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Describe it using as many of your senses as you can – the dizzying spin as you leave the board, the pressure against your feet as the springboard catapults you into space, the feel of the wind against your skin as you arc downwards, the sound of the splash as your body hits the water. etc.etc.etc.
Topic sentence? You know what you are saying in your piece – and your topic sentence has to reflect that, so you’re on your own there.
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A few days ago
I can hear the water swaying (or something) as i steadily climb on the board. I can see people splashing, watching, and playing as i raise up to perform my dive. (i’m guessing)
you want it to be creative.
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