How do you do this?
– The human substitute for pheromones may be perfumes. Most common in ancient times were musk and other fragrances derived from animal oils.
^^^ I think that one is correct but Im not sure?^^^
– Some people say that people began using perfumes to cover up the smell of burning flesh. During sacrifices to the gods.
I put >>> Some people say that people began using perfumes to cover up the smell of burning flesh during sacrifices to the gods.
-The earliest historical documents from the Middle East record the use of fragrances. Not only in religious ceremonies but on the body.
I put>>> The earliest historical documents from the Middle East record the use of fragrances not only in religious cermonies but on the body.
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In your 3 examples, the 2nd thing is a fragment because there is no verb. But the 2nd sentence of the first one has a verb, so it’s not a fragment. The phrasing is more bookish than kittylover’s suggested alternative, but that doesn’t mean it’s a fragment.
The first one is a fragment though.
What was “most common”?
You could say: “the most common perfumes in ancient times were musk and other fragrances derived from animal oils.”
good job. A+ for you!
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