A few days ago
nothing11111

How do u understand this sentence?

“Repeated exposure to interpersonal relating used for marketing may result in viewing relationships as conditional, not as a bond formed by mutual respect and affection. ”

Is the grammar alright? Is it comprehensive?

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A few days ago
don’t plagiarize

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are you trying to say:

the repeated exposure of viewers to interpersonal relationships, when used for marketing purposes, may result in subjects viewing such relationships as conditional activities, as opposed to a natural bond formed by mutual respect and affection.

or are you trying to say

Do not fall in love with the cute girl across the hall just because you both drink the same brand of coffee. she may switch brands, and then you will be out the door also

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A few days ago
Herm
I understand what you are trying to say, but it seems like you are trying too hard. It needs several rereads so I would definitely rewrite it so that it is more understandable the first time round. Try to make it flow better so that you have done the work instead of the reader having to do the work. Unless, of course it makes more sense in your paragraph. Hope it goes well 🙂
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A few days ago
mimi
Comprehensible but the sentence doesn’t flow; needs a rewrite.
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A few days ago
Manny
The grammar appears to be correct and I find it to be comprehensive.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
i have no fricken clue what it is you are trying to say. i dunno maybe im just stupid but umm wow lots of big words there.
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