How do I word this sentence?

i was only a foot away from the door when BAM! i was hit full in the face

how should it be?

I was only a foot away from the door, when…BAM! I was hit full

where should the punctuation go? should i out a comma there? should the […] be there?

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A few days ago

Lisa B

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There isn’t a single answer to this. Different authors might do it different ways. My way would be this:

“I was only a foot away from the door when — BAM! — I was hit full in the face.”

You could also use commas instead of dashes.

I would not use suspension points [ . . .]. They tend to suggest time passing, and that’s not at all what you mean.

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