Everything looks good, the only thing I would suggest changing or revising is the last few sentences – perhaps to:

As a result, it is clear that working in conjunction with my coworkers, I brought much more value to the company than if I was working alone. Now, teamwork means more to me than ever and above all, it is listening, respecting, and supporting new ideas for the sake of generating others in the future.

Before I began working as a Deputy Director, I never really analyzed what teamwork meant. I wanted to know more about people working together to achieve the team’s purpose and goals. Despite my lack of practical experience, I was assigned to different tasks which clearly required close collaboration and cooperation with the accounting department. One of these tasks was gathering the necessary data to analyze the financial health of the company. Needless to say, this was possible only with the collaboration and assistance of the entire team. As a result, it is clear that my experience working with my coworkers brought much more value to the company (and to me) than if I was working alone. So now teamwork means more than ever to me; above all, it is listening, respecting others and supporting new ideas for the sake of generating others in the future.

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I can’t find alot of mistakes.Just: “One of these tasks “should be one of those tasks because it’s past tense.Also you should insert a colon just after “above all it is”.

I think that it sounds good, I am not an expert, just a mom that is back in college.