A few days ago
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Good thesis statement???? how would you write it differently?

I believe my business degree will improve my personal development and enable me to accommodate changes in marketing, advertising, and the workforce.

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A few days ago
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I believe that I will be better able to adapt to changes in marketing, advertising, and the workforce, as well as improve my personal development, with a degree in business.

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I believe that a business degree would deem me better able to adapt to changes in marketing, advertising, and the workforce, as well as improve my personal development.

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A few days ago
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Sounds great to me. If I had to write one, I think it would sound just like that!
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