First, you write about the need for your point. You mention that, then you sum up an idea of what you are going to say.

Then you say it. Back it up with specific points that cite important thoughts or quotations that are credible to the reader.

Finally, you restate what you just said, summing it all up.

That is a perfect essay. If it’s clear and persuasive, good job, you just won an essay contest.

You’re a girl, so how does it make you feel that guys might think you can’t drive? Or that you have to clean the house and do the laundry but guys don’t?

Think of a stereotype that applies to you. Are you Jewish? Then you’re a tightwad and have cash stashed away. Are you African American? Then you MUST be good at sports. Are you Asian? Math and science must be soooo easy for you.

It’s not just individuality at stake. People may assume you’re good at something that you couldn’t do if you tried, or that you can’t do something just because you’re white, or Muslim, or wear glasses.

What do people think about you just because of your race? Because you’re a girl? Because of your religion? And how does it make you feel?

And they just shove someone in a category like “prep” or “loner” or “poser” or “emo/goth” or “popular” “fat” “ugly” “loser”

etc.

And people just judge them from the appearance not about how they really are.

And some people consider others to be “popular” and others to be “losers” or “not popular” so that kinda hurts there feelings?

i hope that helps!

if you have some time can you PLEASE help my with MY question?

thanks

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