A few days ago
Anonymous

essay help?

so im writing an essay on graham greene’s ‘the destructors’……so my thesis might be something like: “though we have the choice between good and evil, our choices reflect our human nature” first of all does that make sense? what should my paragraphs be? or should i come up with a different topic?

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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I get what you’re saying, and I like it. I would change the “though,” however. There’s no kind of contradictory clause after the comma like “though” implies. Maybe try something more like “We have a choice between good and evil, and that choice reflects our human nature.”

BTW, if you use “the choice” or “a choice,” the second half of the sentence would make more sense with “our choice” — singular. Just a suggestion. =)

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A few days ago
shallytally
that is an excellent thesis – I am impressed… very
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A few days ago
Anonymous
i like it =]
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