A few days ago
Anonymous

English paper help!!?

I have to write a paper about a relationship i have with something, so i was going to write about my Sidekick3 (cell phone) could someone please help me think of a introductuion paragraph and a thesis. i have a couple ideas but i really need to get a good grade if someone smart could help me out THANKSS!!

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A few days ago
thatguyjoe

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I’m thinking something along the lines of an introduction asking what a relationship is.

What is a relationship and why is it important?

Is it that you are reaching out and making contact beyond yourself to someone or something outside of yourself?

Why is that important?

In this case, relationships are, for whatever reason you conclude, so important that you develop your own relationship with a tool that’s become essential for helping you maintain your other relationships- your cell phone.

It’s similar to how the mind craves information and input. Books can often provide this. So many people end up having a relationship, an adoration even, for not just the information itself but the books that contain it. The book brings the bibliophile stimulation, pleasure, contact with the world and thus this person develops a special relationship with the medium of books. Think about how a bibliophile gets to love the feel, shape, smell, and other features of books. Is that similar to how you feel about your phone?

What are some key differences, though? Can you figure out how a book works? How about your cell phone?

Another angle might be comparing how you feel when you are with a person you have a close relationship and how your phone makes you feel. Compare and contrast what you value in a person vs. what you value in a phone. How would absence from a person you have a relationship make you feel? how would a similar absence from your phone make you feel?

There are plenty of angles to introduce your essay, pick what works best for your theme.

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4 years ago
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