english homework- HELP i will choose u as the best answer if u do it.?
should free concert in the open air be banned?
*in my opinion, the problem is not the place but the security.
i havent been at any concert yet because none of my favorite singers have came here.
charly is a really talented person who could give a lot more to his fans if we just let him be.
he heard a song that changed his life. after hearing it, he turned deepest into music-
I DONT SPEAK ENGLISH AS MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO IM SURE THERE ARE SOME MISTAKES!!
PLEASE CORRECT THE SENTENCES AND I WILL CHOOSE U AS THE BEST ANSWER-
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should free concert in the open air be banned?
*in my opinion, the problem is not the place but the security.
i have not been to any concerts because none of my favorite singers have come here yet.
charly is a really talented person who could give a lot more to his fans if we just let him be.
he heard a song that changed his life. after hearing it, he turned his deepest thoughts into music-
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i’m not sure if thats what you are trying to say but i patched a few things up. you can take it or keep it the way it was before.
Charly is a really talented person who could give a lot more to his fans if we just let him be.
He heard a song that changed his life.After hearing it,he tuned deepest into music.
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