take out “the” before nature, it is just enjoy nature.

in summer not on summer

We have a little house over there on the beach. (adding border is confusing. You mean the Mexican-American border? take it out people know what a house on the beach is)

When the night comes, the palm frond’s shadows gently stroke my window (personification= shadows don’t really stroke but this will show the teacher that u r using what you have learned in school). I look out that window into the seemingly endless night dotted with twinkling stars.

the garden is RELAXING not RELAX. You cant hear the waves one by one. ” I can hear the waves crashing one after the other”.

When the sun carresses my face with its warm touch I know that it is time to AWAKEN and head toward the beach because it is calling me.

My Manzanillo’s home is the perfect place to relax and enjoy nature. It as become a tradition for my family to go there every Summer and enjoy the beauty of Manzanillo since we have a Summer home there and we are close to the beach.

In the evening the palm trees create shadows all around ,and from my bedroom window I stand watching for a long time listening to the breeze of the light wind that creates a movement of the leaves that give a sense of hypnosis. When I gaze at the night sky everything seems so calm and clear , the moon glows and the stars are shinning .

In the garden stands an avocado tree that is in full bloom with beautiful flowers then there is the coconut tree sided by a huge banana tree . I take a deep breath to absorb the fresh air, and observing the beauty that surround me , while I lay in my bed thinking how lucky I am to be here, and slowly I drifting off to sleep I hear the waves and Morpheus is now near !

I will dream about tomorrow and when I wake-up there will be my little piece of Eden waiting for me.

You a very lucky ! For a minute I was there !

My Manzanillo house is the perfect place to relax and enjoy nature. In my family, during summer it’s a tradition to go to Manzanillo. We have a little house that is on the beach. When night comes, the shadows from the palm trees in the garden are cast upon my bedroom window, from which I can see the moon and stars. The sky in Manzanillo is clear and free of pollution. The garden has an avocado tree, many beautiful flowers, grass, a coconut palm and a banana palm. The place is so relaxing that Morpheus invites me to sleep. Everything is so quiet that I can hear the waves one by one. When the sun shines into my room I know that it is time to wake up because the beach is waiting for me.

Is Manzanillo a place? If so:

My house in Manzanillo is the perfect place to relax and enjoy nature. In my family, during the summer, it’s a tradition to go to Manzanillo. We have a little house over there, which is located on the beach. When night comes, the shadows that are created by my garden’s palms surround my room’s window; where I can see the moon and many stars because the sky is so clear and free of pollution. The garden has an avocado tree, many beautiful flowers, grass, a coconut palm and a banana palm. That place is so relaxing that Morpheus invites me to sleep; everything is so quiet and silent that I can hear the waves one by one. When the sun shines on my room, I know that its time to wake up because the beach is waiting for me.

In my family it’s a tradition to take a trip back to Manzanillo during the summer months, Which I enjoy greatly. { The house, is on the border of the beach } When night fall comes,the moonlight creates silouttes of my palm trees over my window paine. How beautiful a view it is. The stars in the sky at night are so clear and so bright there in Manzanillo, that it does not even compare to the view anywhere else.

enjoy nature, not THE nature. In the summer it’s tradition for my family to go to Manzanillo. We have a little house there located by the beach. When night comes, the shadows ……..

That place is so relaxing……..

1. enjoy nature

2. In my family, it’s traditional to go to Manzanillo over the summer.

3. on the border

4. the shadows created

5. so clear and free

6. so relaxing

7. it’s time to wake up

Edit: Obviously if english is someone’s second language, reading a passage out loud will not help them determine what is correct or not.

My house in Manzanillo is the perfect place to relax and enjoy nature. In summer it is a tradition in my family to go to Manzanillo.We have a little house over there which is located on the edge of the beach. ……………………………The sky is so CLEAR………………That place is so RELAXING…………..

You are very good at English. Your house in Manzanillo sounds beautiful.

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Muy buena. Change ‘on summer’ to ‘in summer’. ‘Clearly’ to ‘clear’. ‘my garden’s palms’ to ‘the palms’. ‘that place is so relax’ to ‘that place is so relaxing’. ‘when the sun shines on my room’ to ‘when the sun shines into my room’.