editing suggestions !!!! 10pts best answer!!!1?
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Just for starters, get rid of the ‘I have heard’. That is inching your way into a discussion starting with one toe, and it isn’t a strong way to open.
Why not simply begin with the saying, “Minds are like parachutes – they operate best when they are open. We’ve all heard this statement, laughed at it, and gone on to something else. But let’s back up a minute and think about how that statement relates to the learning process, personal development and, more imortantly how it relates to open discussion in the classroom.
Then go on as you have.
Your last line – challenge you WHICH makes the class…
with should be which, thats all i found wrong with this. its very good btw.
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