“Sometimes, in order to achieve your dreams, you need to put yourself out there.”

you just have to play around the main theme and the purpose of the story. You need to think why the author has written that story and what is he trying to convey. And then, just throw in some “hard/important” grammar words and THERE YOU GO 🙂

you have a thesis statement!

Should abortion be legal???

Facts. Try to incorporate atleast two facts into the thesis.

Statistics. A good statistic is always welcome..

You must take a side… you can always write your paper about pros and cons… but you must explain your side… and back it up with good evidence…

Thesis…

(Abortion is disregarded by many people, yet some believe that it is a violation of God’s Will…)

You have already set it up for arguement… about how it isnt a bad thing, yet you have also set up an argument for why it is a bad thing…

if you need help, email me and ill be glad to help..

Some ways that adult’s bug, bother, and annoy me is that they are always getting me to do chores, won’t let me hang out past 10 pm, and are always commenting about my clothes.

Does this help?

http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html

hope this helps