check my grammar plz..!!?
im an esl, and i dont want my grade to get lower because of my grammar mistakes,
so can anyone grade my grammar
This play is talk about a child name Helen Keller, who becames a blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then write a litter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist send Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss. Sullican does not gave up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. And she also taught Helen language by using hand to feel each alphabet. Event though it tooks a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realized that everything has a name.
Theme
people should not relinquish on their goals.
Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.
People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible.
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This play is about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes blind at six months old because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller writes a letter to Dr. Chisholm, a famous oculist in Baltimore. Dr. Chisholm sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen is a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach, but Miss Sullivan does not give up on her. After numerous struggles between the two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully teaches Helen good manners as well as language by using her hands to feel each letter of the alphabet. It takes a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realizes that everything has a name.
helen was a spoiled child who was wilf, obstinate, and hard ot teach. but miss sullivan does not give up on her, ever after numerous struggles between the two of them. eventually miss sullivan successfully taught helen good manners. she also taught helen language by using hands to feel each letter of the alphabet. even though it took a long time for this miracle to happen, helen finally realized that everything has a name.
people should not relinquish their goals. a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence. people should always try, even if they think it is impossible.
This play is talk about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes a blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then writes a litter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss. Sullican does not give up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. And she also taught Helen language by using hand to feel each alphabet. Event though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realized that everything has a name.
Theme
people should not relinquish on their goals.
Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.
People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible.
This play is about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then writes a letter to a famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist then sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen.
Helen was a spoiled child who was wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss Sullivan did not give up on her, and after numerous struggles between the two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have good manners. She also taught Helen language by using sign language and then having Helen feel the letters in her hand. Event though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.
Theme
People should not relinquish on their goals.
Sometimes a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence.
People should always try things, even things they think are impossible.
just copy and paste it back onto word or whatever program u r using π
good job π
Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. However Miss. Sullican does not gave up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, she successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. She also taught Helen how to red brail. Even though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.
well i edited most of it and i really hope this wasnt a joke i mean im not saying it was poor but you couldve done better with the rough draft and i hope it was a rough draft because if it isnt then you just wasted my coffee break… err im in highschool i dont have coffee breaks lol hehhe but anywho (lol) you should copy the paragraph i wrote it will be more concrete but you did a good job though
Theme
people should not relinquish on their goals.
Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.
People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible
Helen was a spoiled child who was wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss Sullivan did not give up on her, even after numerous struggles between two of them. Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have good manners. She also taught Helen language by using her hand to feel each letter in the alphabet. Even though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.
Theme
People should not relinquish on their goals.
Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence.
People should always try, even on things they think are impossible.
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Hope this helps.
it should read
This play talks about a child named Helen Keller, who became blind six months after she was born due to illness. After Aunt Ev’s suggestion,Mr. Keller then writes a letter to a famous Oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist sent Annie Sullivan to teach Hellen,she was a spoiled child whom was wild,obstinate and hard to teach. But Miss Sullican does not give up trying to teach her. After many struggles she was able to teach her. Good manners,language by hand,touching the alphabet. Even though it takes a long time, the miracle happened. Teaching her everything has a name.
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