A few days ago
madeline

Can you give constructive criticism about my possible story turned novel?

Can you give constructive criticism about my possible story turned novel?

I’m writing a novel about a FineArts college graduate who helped an old woman, who gave her a “magical” canvass who can grant whatever she desires for six months…Only to find out just a week before the deadline the old woman wanted something in return: the lives of all those she loved deeply or herself to take the place of the old woman who actually ” lived “for decades in a “painting” —patiently waiting for a hungry prey she can trick to substitute her in place, until the girl finds her own victim by then…But the girl finds a way out of this and so begins a journey to what seemed like the unknown–to save the lives of those she loved and at least to prolong the deadline before she goes…..what do you think? can that be a good story for a fantasy / dark novel? quickly tell me—-as soon as possible…thanks!

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A few days ago
remowlms

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Sounds very interesting – go with it.
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