A few days ago
Can you edit/revise my introduction paragraph, please?
In the novel, Speak, Melinda Sordino’s voice is drowning in the desolation of daunting silence. After being ruthlessly raped of her virginity, she loses her ability to speak. As her silence prolongs, Melinda’s bleak life has descended sadly and viciously to a self-imposed and other-supported exile, where she sinks further into her enduring depression, and embarks on a expedition of introspection and self-creation.
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Last sentence is a run on sentence. Divide it maybe. How about: Despite her inability to express herself verbally, Melinda embarks on an expedition of introspection and self-creation. Other than that, it’s pretty good.
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A few days ago
what’s the assignment?
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