A few days ago
Anonymous

Can’t seem to fix this fragment Sentence?

Media coverage of the war in Iraq has been a contoversial topic in the media itself. [Especially the mainstream press and broadcast int he U.S. and Canada.]

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A few days ago
Karlene

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Make it one sentence with a comma: “Media coverage of the war in Iraq has been a controversial topic in the media itself, especially the mainstream press and broadcast in the US and Canada.” The problem is that [especially the mainstream press and broadcast in the US and Canada] is not a complete sentence since there is no verb in there. Therefore, it’s can’t stand alone as its own sentence. It really should be connected to your first sentence anyway since it modifies it. Use the comma like I showed you!
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Media coverage of the war in Iraq has been a contoversial topic in the media (especially the mainstream press and broadcast in the U.S. and Canada).
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A few days ago
Anonymous
The War in Iraq has been a controversial topic by the Media, especially the mainstream press and broadcast in the U.S. and Canada.
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