A few days ago
Anonymous

Can someone edit my english paper please???? or at least part of it?? THANK YOU!!?

People often talk about the sea being blue. For me, “Blue” is a far too simple word to describe the beauty of nature. The ocean is actually light blue and dark blue and aquamarine and navy blue and turquoise and white in little patches. As the color of the sky changes along with the course of the day, the ocean’s hue transform as a whole; this is what I found the most beautiful in the natural world. This was what I observed on one of the days of my recent cruise trip.

In the morning, the ocean resembled a cobalt blue ruffled sheet of silk. The wave pushed one another to a forward motion. Charging ahead, the waves crested foaming with white bubbles rushed up the exterior of the ship and receded quickly. Crested and receded, crested and receded…the waves generated a continuous pattern of eternal rhythm. The sun beams on the ocean and the water glittered with silver sparkles.

In the evening, while the ocean gradually shifted into a navy blue, the waves began to die down. Flickering, the ocean sparkled like a firework. Finally, when the main light of the prow came on and I turned up my collar up against the icy evening winds, the water turned pitch black. The sun set and became a fiery orange-pink shimmering splodge. Witnessing the metamorphosis of the ocean from the morning to night is an amazing experience. The view was mesmerizing!

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A few days ago
Pamela C

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On a recent cruise to ____(fill in where you went)__________, I overheard several passengers comment about the blueness of the ocean. For me, it opened up a completely new world of enchantment; blue may be the obvious color of the seas, but for those of us who love nature it is only the beginning.

Throughout this journey, my senses were awakened by the wide array of light blue, navy blue, aquamarine, and turquoise. Shades of white surrounded the ship as water glittered with silver sparkles while the sun reflected upon it. The smell of saltiness in the breeze and the coolness of the air contrasted against of the warmth of the sun on my arms and face.

In the morning, the ocean resembled a cobalt blue ruffled sheet of silk. The waves pushed one another to a continuous forward motion. Charging ahead, the waves crested, foaming with white bubbles that rushed up the exterior of the ship and receded just as fast. Cresting and receding, uninterrupted, the waves generated a permanent pattern of eternal rhythm. In the evening, as the ocean gradually shifted into darkness, the waves began to die down. Flickering, the ocean sparkled like Fourth of July fireworks. Finally, when the main light of the prow came on and I turned up my collar up against the icy evening winds, the water turned pitch black. The sunset and became a fiery orange-pink shimmering splodge. Witnessing the metamorphosis of the ocean from the morning to night is life-changing experience. The view was mesmerizing!

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A few days ago
aki
if you have written it i’ll tell you it’s average because what you write you should’nt tell you should let the reader feel it.

people often talk about the sea being blue.for me,”blue” is a really simple and out rangeable word.talking about me the sea is porcelian,cobalt &azure & platinum in little pattches.as th colour of the sky changes with the course of the day,the ocean’s hue transforms as a whole; that is what makes me anxious for it’s beauty in the natural & modern world.this was what i pondered on one of the days of my spectular cruise trip.

i’m sorry i couldn’t edit it more!!!

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4 years ago
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many individuals can possibly edit it for you. yet you will nevertheless no longer learn a reliable way of doing it for your self. the superb advice I ever gained on enhancing and correcting my artwork replaced into to artwork backwards. Take each and each sentence from the tip to the beginning up as though it have been status by itself. Can it? Is it real written as a sentence by itself. Are each and all the words spelled wisely, capitalized, and so on… once you seem at your paper from commencing to end, you have a tendency to loose your self because of the fact you realize what you assert so which you will pass over various issues others won’t. yet once you seem at it backwards- you will see it from our eyes. Then ask somebody to edit your artwork.
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A few days ago
Mika
Too many color names…….

You just go on & on about shades of blue.

Try to put in something more natural like sand, beached, & clear water (NOT Blue!) & water animals, fishes & more of the.

Try to describe how you felt instead of how many shades of blue (colors) you saw.

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A few days ago
Jessica
I think this is a great paper. try this – http://www.essay-paper.net/proofreading.html
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