Can someone edit my english paper please???? or at least part of it?? THANK YOU!!?
In the morning, the ocean resembled a cobalt blue ruffled sheet of silk. The wave pushed one another to a forward motion. Charging ahead, the waves crested foaming with white bubbles rushed up the exterior of the ship and receded quickly. Crested and receded, crested and receded…the waves generated a continuous pattern of eternal rhythm. The sun beams on the ocean and the water glittered with silver sparkles.
In the evening, while the ocean gradually shifted into a navy blue, the waves began to die down. Flickering, the ocean sparkled like a firework. Finally, when the main light of the prow came on and I turned up my collar up against the icy evening winds, the water turned pitch black. The sun set and became a fiery orange-pink shimmering splodge. Witnessing the metamorphosis of the ocean from the morning to night is an amazing experience. The view was mesmerizing!
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Throughout this journey, my senses were awakened by the wide array of light blue, navy blue, aquamarine, and turquoise. Shades of white surrounded the ship as water glittered with silver sparkles while the sun reflected upon it. The smell of saltiness in the breeze and the coolness of the air contrasted against of the warmth of the sun on my arms and face.
In the morning, the ocean resembled a cobalt blue ruffled sheet of silk. The waves pushed one another to a continuous forward motion. Charging ahead, the waves crested, foaming with white bubbles that rushed up the exterior of the ship and receded just as fast. Cresting and receding, uninterrupted, the waves generated a permanent pattern of eternal rhythm. In the evening, as the ocean gradually shifted into darkness, the waves began to die down. Flickering, the ocean sparkled like Fourth of July fireworks. Finally, when the main light of the prow came on and I turned up my collar up against the icy evening winds, the water turned pitch black. The sunset and became a fiery orange-pink shimmering splodge. Witnessing the metamorphosis of the ocean from the morning to night is life-changing experience. The view was mesmerizing!
people often talk about the sea being blue.for me,”blue” is a really simple and out rangeable word.talking about me the sea is porcelian,cobalt &azure & platinum in little pattches.as th colour of the sky changes with the course of the day,the ocean’s hue transforms as a whole; that is what makes me anxious for it’s beauty in the natural & modern world.this was what i pondered on one of the days of my spectular cruise trip.
i’m sorry i couldn’t edit it more!!!
You just go on & on about shades of blue.
Try to put in something more natural like sand, beached, & clear water (NOT Blue!) & water animals, fishes & more of the.
Try to describe how you felt instead of how many shades of blue (colors) you saw.
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