A few days ago
Anonymous

Can somebody grade my essay for me please?

One profound way of seeking out success is by responsibility. Success in a work place or any high stress environment can be proven strenuous but mean while awarding. If you’re good at something, the chances are that you can succeed at it, but it’s the responsibility to make the right decisions that make your success stay that way and excel.

In a job situation you can not just avoid the work that you are given, it is not wise to ignore it. Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, the character Elizabeth Bennet felt that it was her responsibility to visit her sister while she was ill. The only way she could visit was by walking three miles to Netherfield, as the horses had their own jobs at their farm and the Bennet family could not afford to part with one. Elizabeth’s mother did not approve of her walking but Elizabeth did not wish to avoid the walk. As a result after taking responsibility and walking, Elizabeth got to visit her ill sister at the Bingley residence.

Despite the importance of taking on responsibly, it could be that you could gain success at a job but not have the responsibly to up hold the title. Working at something takes time, patience, and of course responsibly, but one could become unfocused resulting in losing their job. For example my schooling is not going to be easy but it would be worth it to obtain admission into a college or have a high score on a fundamental test. I could how ever put efforts in my grades in school, and then start to fall behind resulting in not having the opportunity to into a good college. Overall in both examples show that there is responsibility is a part of life and if you work hard enough it could bring you somewhere or even better, it could get you success.

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A few days ago

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B- It’s pretty good, but some of the sentences need to be cleaned up. “Meanwhile” is one word. “Elizabeth did not wish to avoid the walk ” is a little awkward sounding. Maybe “Elizabeth was determined to make the walk to see her sister” or something like it would work better. “Uphold” is one word, as is “however.” Check your punctuation. You need a few commas or semicolons here and there in a few of your sentences to make them more readable.. You could also make them into two sentences.
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A few days ago
albertteacake
Not bad apart from the last paragraph which rambles somewhat.

Break up the sentences and be clear what you want it to mean.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
My suggestion, is to use your Microsoft word, if you have it…

The content, your teacher will be grading, so I don’t know if any of us could really tell you whether it is good or not…But, if you copy and paste, or send what you have written to Microsoft word, it will correct your punctuation, tell you if you have your sentences and paragraphs correctly written. And correct any misspelling you may have. Good luck…

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