A few days ago
carmenclassof06

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Although I strongly commend you on your methods of teaching, its highly uncommon for a teacher to be without at least one fault. Your fault lies within your assigned teachers assistant. In my opinion I believe that the students could have benefited in the classroom just from your expertise alone. Your assistant Willow lacked the experience needed to accurately convey any subject matter. Her Inexperience was very noticeable and I often disproved of her conducting classroom lessons or discussions. She tried very hard to emulate your style of teaching, but often her teaching resulted in confusion and disdain. In light of the problem I understand that teachers can not be everything for every student …

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A few days ago
Shy Guy

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apparently your are using opinion in this article so i would try to get quotes with other teachers or stundents that agree with you and pput some of them in there.
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