A few days ago
huichongkim61

i need help plz?

this is letter to congressman for nomination, can you fix the grammar? please thank you.

“hi, my name is chae-ho shin. and i made a mistake on the application. on the application it asked me to indicate which academy you want 1st and 2nd etc.. however, i indicated all of the academy even though i didnt apply there. for example, i indicated u.s naval academy as my 4th choice but i didnt even apply there. I only apply to u.s merchant marine academy which was my first choice. is it okay to indicate all the academy even though I only apply for u.s merhcant marine academy?”

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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“Hi, my name is Chae-Ho Shin. and I made a mistake on the application, on the application it asked me to indicate which academy you want 1st, 2nd, etc. However, I indicated all of the academy even though I didn’t apply there. For example, I indicated U.S. naval academy as my 4th choice but I didn’t even apply there, I only applied to the U.S. merchant marine academy, which was my first choice. Is it alright to indicate all the academy even though I only applied for the U.S. merchant marine academy?”

There, I guess..

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